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Old 06-09-04, 02:28 AM   #9
CaliCollegeGurl
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Well, to me this was a pretty even battle. Y'all both had strengths and weaknesses. AKA ya flow was cool, except some of the rhyme in the middle seemed forced "but go a way cause it time for me to get brain like hannabel lecter" should have been a shorter line and it woulda flowed better. Overall it was straight on simile, weak on metaphor.

DeCroz, your verse had a lot more strong punches, but also some extremely weak ones. "Shit just kept Sunken"...sunken should be erased from your vocab. But this line was off the chain: Still spittin Virgin lyrics, Dawg Ima have to Pop ya Cherry

I gotta give it to Croz because spitting is about the hard punches and he had the metaphor and personals on lock.

v/Croz