bingo!
From: holdin down the three-one-three |
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IP:
t: storm
you used some played out rhymes like the king/throne line..
thats was a lil bit wack too but you had some nice thigs some
hit hard as where some didnt even work out good
your structure was wack....needs much work....much work
your flow was off and you need to throw some multies in there
to get that sonofa bicth flowin... u feel me .....
so you lost becuz of bad flow and no personals played and weak punches
overall *5*
king solo
you threw in s nice opener witch really got evrything flowin and it was
kinda humerous it had me laughin... you kept it flowing fairly well
and u had good structure.... your punches were hitting hard...
personals were good and you supplied links to back up your evidence...
( unlike t-storm and L.i. ) overall your verse was a *8* it was good nice drop
work on flow and harder hitting punches
bestline: Ure just a whiny bitch, tried out for my crew and didn’t get picked
Stick with ure old crew cuz ure just Destined 2 get ure ass kicked
overall Vote: kingsolo for harder hitting punches personals and better flow
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