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Old 06-09-04, 10:39 AM   #6
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:


Big
ayo, im lyrically equipped to merk you in this battle/
im throwin bars like they we're spears, like third world countries killin cattle//
lol...ok
im using masochistic tactics, to scar your exterior with an axe/
its the only way you gon' understand, the fundamental facts//
aight...nice
Your lyrics get drained, jus like colonic irrigation/
washed up piece of shit, dont belong, like your placement// (on this earth)
nice....
my bars haunt your dreams, like freddie kruger, dont hate-them/
if you do you bes' run, and find a safe-haven, with gay-men//
ha ha....
i see you throwin them punches, but none of them-hit/
cos you be throwin them crooked, with a spic-fist//
aight...
5-0 K.O. is the inevitable turn-out/
i spit fire profusely, up in flames, you get burnt-out//
nice....
your simple scripts illiterate, similar to a dyslexic fat spic/
you got no chance in this battle, like the fat spic, tryna do backflips//
alright....but dont use spics again...
you jus tryin to make it, but you an engineered clone, so you fake-it/
like Pinocchio tryna be human , you never gon’ make it, bitch face-it//
ok closer

overall:6.5/10

N-Sight

^^Yawns

Aiyo, 1st off...

Shut tha fuck up with your wack vocab..you lack dope lines-
U MILK your flow for what it's worth..like you got lactose rhymes-
nice opener...
Kid, 3 wins hardly qualify as experience..you must be delirious-
'Bout as serious as FINE MIND's skill..and that is quite silly stuff-
ha ha funny fine minds......
Fuck everything you ever believed in..but yourself is not included-
I could give u AMMO and a NINE..ur dumb ass still couldn't shoot it-
nice punch.....
Knockin me out?..thats a story-line for Ripley's Believe It Or Not-
Ur structure is chopped..I've seen more even edges in wood shop-
nice line here....
Stop, drop, and roll I'm on fire..ur dying at the hand of a rap savage, its-
A fuckin shame that I'm going to beat u with a.............average spit-
aight...
Ur wordplay is herb-play..a nerve frayed from my attacks and hits-
With such a BIG NECK, u can swallow the truth..u are wack as shit-
nice...
Fuck ur baby spit, I got a bib waiting..wipe the nutt from ur face kid-
My endless attrition will have you running to Christians like Mase did-
ha ha nice one here...
Your style is played through out..face it, you got no talent in rap-
You blew ur verse out ur ass..so that makes you talented crap-
hott closer

overall:7.5/10

vote=N-Sight
N-sight gets this... lines were more complex and his shit hit harder