will had better punches and flow/structure. 8ths verse was aite, but sometimes didnt flow well at all. both dope verses tho, a lot of potential.

ps. can u guys return the favour and vote in my battles:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128631

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605

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