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Old 06-09-04, 12:08 PM   #8
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bigneks did have some ill bars tho like 1 or 2...like this one...
my bars haunt your dreams, like freddie kruger, dont hate-them/
if you do you bes' run, and find a safe-haven, with gay-men//
^^that was funny as hell lol...bigneks u came nice in this battle deent vocab and wordplay multies were ok...most of ya punches didnt hit hard and u didnt use anyt personals which made your verse wacker than it really was

overall: 6/10

n-sight

you had your verse in sight :P your structure was good your punches were funny as hell and your wordplay was hott...u didnt really use and good personals you had the one about his record and the one about his name but nothing too hott....your multies were sik and the flow was consistent punches was hittin hard...

fav bars:
Fuck everything you ever believed in..but yourself is not included-
I could give u AMMO and a NINE..ur dumb ass still couldn't shoot it-
Knockin me out?..thats a story-line for Ripley's Believe It Or Not-
Ur structure is chopped..I've seen more even edges in wood shop-
^^lmao hot shyt

overall: 8/10

vote: n0sight :P

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