Yo Wont Win This Battle For The Following Reason. Rhyme Borrowings Considered A Treason./.

Youve Been Theiveing And Deceiveing Us By Leaving This Site. Going To Some Other Forum And Receiveing Ya Shyte./.

Best Start Beleveing A Type Each Spit In Turn.. So Fucking Fast Ma Fingers Get Friction Burns./.


^^^ No offense, but I'm starting to hate this style of long-ish bars and spaces between lines...UGH...ORIGINALITY PLEASE...

^^ But, with that said, the punches were HOT...lol...made my eyes pop open...haha...the rhyming was ASS though, SHYTE? um......NO!


Lyricalmethod Your Battle Records Whack. Yeah You May Of Won 12 But You Lost 9 Times Back To Back./.

Your Crap, Whack, To You It Mayseem. One Day Youll Make It But Face It Its Jus A Day Dream./.

^^ Poorly worded...stop tryna convince dat nigga his record is wack...DISS HIM ON IT...it's like you're talking, not rapping...decent attempt at personals though

...You have nice style with punches. They were hard. Work on your rhyming and structure.


i know why you lack fame,you stuck at wack,im chockin you like white light in a black room
i don't wanna rap dude, i really wanna smack you, & send my dogs to attack you

^^^nice 1st line with the imagery...2nd line was weak

know u happy you a got a few post,your going to get blazed quicker than burnt toast.im boss with the post, i spit liquid nitrogen that ah melt your coast

my punches connectin, sending thunder through your brain
my lyrics killin your defense attacking your main frame

^^ Rhyming is good..flow is good...However, it's as if you have 6-8 too many syllables in each. So, examine that the next time you spit.


my weakest verse will kill you,slice my verse slowly, EITHER WAY U BELOW ME
the only way you'll get phat is if i feed my lines to you
you to transparent niggas see through you, im swayin the crowd like i spit voo-doo
im chippin thorugh you like mushu, you a knockoff like BUFU
you like elapahant man, everything you produce is doo-doo


^^^ Self-boasting....ummmmmmm IONO...good, but not great in this case because it wasn't worded well...


P.S. Here is a list of words you should NEVER USE IN RAP LYRICS:

1..tummy
2..cappucino
3..poo poo
4..doo doo


Vote: close one, but LM gets it for better flow, rhyming, and more creativity...


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