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Old 06-10-04, 12:35 AM   #10
Wordz AhGod
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I beleave that Phatom won this battle. I was as out raged as I guess he was on his last post when Black Haze voted for Smirf.
Smirfs start was weak, it made me not want to read the rest of the rap. I felt my Iq drop from reading his little Chi thing that he had going on. Although Phantoms verse was nothing special and a lot weaker than wat I've seen him do, it still was enough to turn Smirfs face yellow.

Smirf.
Structure. None/0 out of like. a 1000 son.
Punches. I dont know wetha he trying to hit himself becouse I aint see any/ 0 out of 10
"cuz phantom ain't on my level who named you a fag/ i got something to tell nigga... I'm your dad/"
......No you did'nt Smirf. No the fuck you did'nt. that was a bad line gone worse.
Flow. Did'nt exactly see any.
Mataphores. none that were worth mentioning.
Total score.... niggative -5 out 40
You owe me the 10 seconds I stayed awake to read your shit.

PhAnToM01
Structure. not enough glue to hold together I guess.LoL 2 out 10
Punches.
"nigga im like pants wit hands i clap all legs....
U aint winin..im unbeatable like Raw eggs....."
This line could have been written a loooooooot better. but I knew where he was goin wit it. I guess. 4 out 10
Flow. not good, but better than smirfs. 2 out of 10
Metaphores. again not good, but better than smirfs. 1 out of 10.
Total Score.
09 out of 40.

V/ goes to PhAnToM01
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