Yo this was a dope topical, I usually hate reading these because theyre so long and generally lack flow but you both told good stories- I think you both were descriptive about the events written about in the rhymes- I think that Flow Intelligent came with more flow in his verse- I like how Flow came with the story bringing his daughter into the picture in the middle of the verse and stating he had to make a decision, then he continued his story in a way that you didn't question it, but at the end you bring up your daughter again and if the reader goes back you can see its that point where the flow changed, I found it impressive.... and since this is a topical and you both told the story well Ima have to go on that and vote for him... I wish I could break the 1 vote into 4 peices and divide it though cuz you both came nicely- good luck in the future...ez

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