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Old 06-10-04, 08:30 AM   #14
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for casual:

flow:good job probably the best out of the three here 7.5/10

volcab:alright use better then the average of the league 7/10

punches:alot of lines i'll give that nothing overly strong or new though 6/10

overall:20.5/30

breakdown for shadow edge:

flow:no problems here shows why you guys are on top of the league 7/10

volcabretty basic stuff i've seen better from you here before 6/10

punches:some alright lines agaisnt casual but the ones against accomplishment are the same it seems everyone uses nothing new or orginal there my fav line,"Ghostwrite lines in your blood n leave your ass for deadKid don’t dread… at least now your verses actually well red" good closer i thought 6.5/10

overall:19.5/30

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:the bars were streched real bad without any kind of internal structure to help it out not good 5/10

volcabretty basic array not really showing that you should be here 5/10

punches:mainly played ideas but you had quite a few of them so you get points for that 5.5/10

overall:15.5/30 expected more from you here

vote--overall pretty good battle i thought casual got it though
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league