breakdown for whitegold:

flow:still kinda basic but workin better this week try and add complexity to the structure like using internal rhymes either way your improving 6/10

volcab:still on a real basic tip this is something you should look into elevating 5/10

punches:a array of played out lines nothing too personal either instead of the played ideas of momma jokes you should dig around on the board see what's he's posting make jokes from that it'll help your verse be more personal 4/10

overall:15/30 your improving keep workin on it

breakdown for valor:

flow:workin well nothing too complex but good 6/10

volcab:a step up from white gold still room to work though 6/10

punches:a few personal type lines my fav,"ill give u ur first loss like taking ur virgenity and u'll nolonger be a man...." good job here 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--valor gets my vote

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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