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Old 06-10-04, 10:30 AM   #22
*Tay.G*SinCity*
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Aiight, 1st off, Phantom...

You had good flow, but not very good punches. Da punches you did have seemed forced, like these 2 lines especially...

tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....

^^VERY FORCED

You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....

^^A LIL FORCED, BUT MAINLY LACKKS COMPLEXITY...

In all dawg, your verse lackked da complexity and wittiness dat Ketch had.

Ketch you had some nice wordplay, and killer punches. Da type of shit niggaz like to read, coz you know niggaz don't like to read unless it's worthwhile lOl...

VOTE=KETCH
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