Thread: DON vs L.I.
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Old 06-10-04, 12:04 PM   #21
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Li-
Trying a new style...


Tried to give advice but not one person was convinced…
Rhymes so old…
They were used back when Burger King was prince…
Hesitate on the callout and admitted u had a loss to expect…
This guy is so stupid…
Had him thinking Sherlock Holmes (homes) was a housing project…
Godfather? You got a better chance of getting DP nude see…
Cant come close to a true emcee…
So go ahead and run along back to your herb newbies…
Record looks nice but all your opponents are unknown…
How stupid can he be…
Kid needs all he can get but he killed one of his own…get it?
Lines couldn’t get down and dirty if you trained em wit a pig…
You’re my bitch…
That’s why you gotta go around reppin my name in your sig…
stick back to ya old strucutre this was sorta wack.. but its the only thing this
rookie beat you at ...you had nice punches flow and personals
your shit is gonan need work on flow strucutre and alwasy harder hitting pucnes


don your punches werent working..your flow was off overall bad verse.. bad verse..
i see you attempted personals...that didnt work..... the only thing you did better was strucutre
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my vote Li due to harder punches better flow and personals
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