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Old 06-10-04, 02:02 PM   #23
t-storm
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j.smith...structure woz ok........flow woz decent.....
sum multies/metas in there......
but u lost this battle coz although u had attempted punches....they jus didnt hit hard..no personals
ur wordplay was average..wasnt a bad spit....jus basic, u need to up wordplay/creativity..n work on harder punches

deLeon...stucture/flow woz decent...basically jus all round beta coz u had beta wordplay/creativity
also u had punches...
each line woz a solid punch....
ya closer i thought woz sick....
You a "Soft Thug Wannabe" u aint a glowin kat that empties gatz//
Only time you ever "Hustle for Cream" is openin a "Hostess Pack"//
GUD SPIT........

VOTE DeLeon