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Old 06-10-04, 05:51 PM   #3
Know-Gimix
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battlin me'll cost an arm and a leg/
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How do you keep a bitch from drowning? take my foot off the back of his head/
cause this kid dont wanna battle, he's a rookie/
He'd rather go door to door and sell me girlscout cookies/ - The way its written looks fucked up but these two bars sound when spit is pretty funny- I liked ur closer also, decent punches, you didn't involve any complicated concepts but you came quick to the point and disses were pretty good.

I think Blackwells verse lacked in any heavy punchlines, I didn't feel the wordplay you tried to incorporate and all in all I just didn't feel the flow of the verse... My vote to Eyedentdy- return the favor either of you....... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126121
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