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Old 06-10-04, 05:54 PM   #294
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here's a demo: I'm the new kid on the street, the one with tight flos and musical beat, watch me kill and burn, my rhymes so sick it makes ur stomach churn, Some call me Dr. Dre's brother, im so good u cant pick no other, I,m packed with lyrix and verses, most filled with rymes and curses, so make up ur mind, to choose me just sign the bottom line.......



Personally I Think .. You Can Do Better..!!

1.) Your Flow Is Off Balance
2.) Could Be In Better Form
3.) Need To Elevate! (So Doesn't Everybody)
4.) Could Work On All Aspects

But You Do Have Potential..!!! ..

Out

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