hmm,lets see

besthandle:no offence or anything but your verse was straight ass dogg,your opener was weak and your rhyme scheme was pretty off.you need to work on everything pretty much.so try harder,or if you were doing your best,battle more and elevate

c-quence:your verse wasnt that much better,you crunching him like a toad line was kind of weird but you were better without a doubt.just work on wordplay and maybe structure.

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" If you disrespect me I'll kill you, slice you with my blade or hit you with my shoe."

"Don't beef or I'll blaze you up like reef."

"I got mo' quotes than sailors got boats."

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