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Old 06-10-04, 07:56 PM   #13
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insane 16 most of your punches were not hard hitting..they lacked a lot of substance, good flow and structure though...my favorite part of your evrse was this

u cant win like its a spell or hex perhaps a vex/
ur destined for failure like kids wit broken nex/
ur stuck in the corner time to panic/
u couldnt fukin escape if u were annexed/

thats a good piece..decent closer...good multis....over all it made your verse a lot better...elevation on the punches will be key to your success in the fture


now onto Medallion....Your verse was wayyy too long..I understand why, but i will be suprised if this battle lasts any less than a week or 2..people don't wanna vote on something that takes 15 minutes to read...but...I did read all of it..and I must say you reffered to yourself as bein a gangster a lot...normally I disaprove of that...buyt your flow was nice..your rhyme scheme worked for you..and you did have some hard hitting punches...what makeds this battle hard is...your verse was so long..it's hard to figure out the ratio between all the lines and dope punches would be...but since yours was longer..you had more punches..and they were harder hitting..my vote goes to you medallion
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