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Old 06-10-04, 08:27 PM   #7
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okay smartzz your verse was good..very good flow..hard hitting punches..good structure....parts made me laugh..and very very strong personals.....I'd gtive you verse a 40 out of 50 my favorite line was.........teeth gone then you *Not-gonna-smile* you gotta be whilin to go against me knowing you'll get "crippled-kid".../
so i guess its self explanatory.... why they call you *LITTLE-TRIP"...//

that was pretty funny....anyways..good drop...and as far as for you Lil trip

your verse lacked structure...but the flow wqasn't bad..decent punches...accept for this punch...

yo bitch ass will be walkin wit crutches aint no real way you can touch dis
yo keystyle lacks real punches it reminds me of yo asshole rusted n busted


how you know what his assholes like? thats a diss on yourself kid..anyways...you had some okay lines...like this was my favorite

couldnt win this spit if i yo lines married me than took it after you bury me
aint no rhyme charity i upped n left this american pie "Jim" like Michelle Flarity

anyways...I'd say overall smartzz had this battle....but you totally lost it with that line about his asshole...that was the nail in the coffin man..no hate..keep bangin
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