rated...i think you had a dope topical verse...tons of raw emotion and depth in your piece...felt like i was right there...good wordplay structure and flow also...how you worded everything made your verse come together alot better...i like how you structured your verse good...like the order of events...and the emotion in this piece was very good...it made you feel a sense of reality from your verse...

VA i think you had a dope verse also the biggest problems i found with your verse was that the first half of it had nothing to do with the topic at hand...you more or less described actions and pain that took course in prison which isnt really about the topic...but then when you came to the next part it rounded off well but your structure was a lil off and you never throughouly stayed on topic you kinda bounced around sometimes midway through ya verse...the ending wasnt all that too good because your verse posessed so much energy and emotion throughtout the 2nd part that when u got to the last 2 or 3 bars it didnt really go to well with the rest of your verse...

Stayed on topic more: Rated
Wordplay: Rated
multies: VA
structure: Rated
Flow : VA
Consistency : Rated
Enjoyability: Rated

vote: Rated

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