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Originally Posted by UnHoly Wun

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Im Now in Hell With a Life Sentence to WithHold..
A Cell with Mould the Darkness always Cold..

My Life was Settled by 1 Action My Only Fate..
I was put here For Living a Life of Anger and Hate..

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This was nice. It captured the feelings of the prisoner really well and u had some nice vocab. I think you could have expanded even more with this topic but u did a great job with what u have already. Nice work