Lil AJ: played stuff, couldnt see any punches.. gotta elevate man... work on flow first and punches after that. Make all your words rhyme, dont just put random stuff in, it has to roll off the tongue right... dont quit rap man, just improve, its all prac., head to the cyphers.

Magician: lil bit of wordplay lil bit of personal stuff. Your at the level where you need to make your flow more complex, and mature a little.. im not disrespecting you or anything though. use multis and innners to get your flow sounding ill, and what i meant by mature was drop that gangsta thing.. like all the "nigga" and that in your rhymes... you could if you were freestyling and u were actually a gangsta.. then the audience could see, but on the net its kind of "try hard", especially if you're white.. how often do you see em say nigga?? pretty much never.. but even if you are black its still pretty lame.

my vote: Magician

could you guys return the favour?? need some votes on this battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1339183

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