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Old 06-11-04, 09:23 AM   #9
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one sided battle complex illness definately took this...his punches actually made sense and were pretty hott for someone at his level lol jk...but decent wordplay nice structure consistent flow...good verse...as for lil aj that was one of the worst verses i have ever seen on RB...half of it didnt rhyme so when u got to the second half of your verse u didnt even wanna read it thats how bad it was lil AJ u really need to elevate in all areas...first of like making sure your lines rhyme that always helps and that you have punches and not just filler

vote : complex illness ~!1!~
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