I'll smack you wit a backhand...
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan...
In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman...

^^ One problem, CATSCANS are for the BRAIN...

a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo..
haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo...
dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO...

im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz...
fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz...

^^^ The structure looks strange, but it flows well enough...up complexity in metas/wordplay and punches

I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do
please, for God's sake!...
...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U!
Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins
Battlin u on a message board?...
...didn't know I was playin board games!*
Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all!
actin' like a man but...
...umm do u even have a pair of balls?!


^^ More weird structure...flow is de decent...some funny lines...but they lack complexity...up wordplay



Vote: Black for being slightly more complex and having slightly harder hitting punches


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