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Old 06-11-04, 12:36 PM   #15
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Oh it looks like your affraid to post first
plus i dissed you when you said i needed to elevate
Remember that shit.....
Thats when all of this started any way
SO don't front like you dont know im telling the truth
Even the whole site can go back and see that yall did start the shit
So stop waisting my time and spit...
before i see your true color's come shining threw
yellow.....in case you were wondering what color it was...LMAO
So drop it or live up to your color....


^^ This is not a flow...it's you talking to him...work on flow and rhyming...also, you need to set you lines up with metas and some wordplay that leads to a punch, preferrably at the end of the line...structure is off as well...


here i will give u 5 mics made of solid medalian/
u still couldnt win....and they say im wack cuz im white italian/
u could call this battle marrige cuz there only one pussy/
wack insults from the 40's like "insane main wussy"/
and that will be his hottest~line in his modest~mind/
lines like u lost in space outa mind and outta time/

^^ Aiyo, this is WEAK dawg...weak...but it wins simply because you are FLOWING and the other cat did not...you need to elevate your vocab, punches, rhyming, and metas...


Vote: Insane, lesser of two evils...lol...he actually tried to flow/diss in his verse