COuld you all please RTF and vote HONESTLY on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129199



aiight...breakdown

Deleon/Flow
On a scale of 1-10, 10 being the highest:

Flow:7
Rhyming:7
Imagery:7
Vocab:7
Wordplay:5
Creativity:6
Story:7

Total out of 70 possible: 46

Standout lines:
“Look bitch, get this straight, this shit never took place/
And after tonight’s over I don’t wanna see yo face/
No need to blow shit all out of proportion/
If you get pregnant you can just get an abortion”/


Dangerous/Potential
On a scale of 1-10, 10 being the highest:

Flow:7
Rhyming:6
Imagery:6
Vocab:6
Wordplay:5
Creativity:5
Story:5...didn't start on topic in my opinion

Total out of 70 possible: 40

Standout lines:
“The condom broke, and I’m expecting to deliver at anytime”
Time froze for a moment, felt like I was the one to commit a crime
Kept staring at the phone, the words just couldn't escape my throat
She said “come meet me soon” so put on my hat and my coat


P.S. DANGEROUS...You're team really didn't stay on topic. Actually, you didn't really start on topic. The first 10 lines could have been about fear of a new job or something.

P.s. DEL & FLOW...Ur first line said "DAMN THE CONDOM BROKE." That can be a good way to get right into the point of the flow. However, it can also be conceived as uncreative because you're not really painting a picture by re-stating the topic of the topical as your first line.
Vote: Del&Flow...