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Old 06-11-04, 02:45 PM   #13
GKillaz05
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V.I.P - iight spit man, you had a couple good lines in there and your flow was on target.

Best Line - this guy sucks alot of ~dicks then gets beat to tha ground/
this is channel ~six reportin lil aj is tha biggest cocksucka around/

Worst Line - i'm rippin your heart out ya chest/your vest i'm stripin these words i'm flippin/ (WEAK)

Lil AJ - You need some work man, your punches wernt all that good and you didnt flow very well either.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Your act is so damn wack
I get a kick outta seein some wack ass rhymes
10 people showed up that's why ur show got cancelled
I make rap cats disappear like this gay ass fag
In case this mother fucker wanna jump bad now
Start some bullshit and imma lay ur punk ass down

OVERALL - Overall was a weak battle here, but I will have to give this battle to V.I.P. he just came harder in this battle. AJ your shit didnt ryhme all that well, and your flow was off.. and you didnt have multi's or a good flow or really anything. Work on some of that shit and improve.

VOTE - V.I.P.

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