flow intell.
your verse wasnt really that good... it was nice but not good...you didnt keep it flowing.. your flow was off..
you had fair wordplay.. bestlines:
my lifes a blunder feelin time slip away downward i plunder
death feels like 20 tons bricks stacked on top of each-other
i try to speak but when i move my lips nothing comes out
im wondering if this is what life after death is about
i have the choice to look back on my life and see all
should i look or not...it could make my heart free fall
^^ those were good but your whole verse fell after that
7.5//10

shadow.. you came with good flow and ok wordplay...
you need work on all of that anyway.......
bestlines:
i think once again to my self " mark u kno how 3 choose it.....
then i hear harps violens.. and extremely roud rep-music....
thats it i reached those beutiful golden-pearly gates.....
now nobody exept for god can detirmen my fate.........
its a party! i saw tupac and said what up..he didnt reply....
try to enter the gates oh no all of a sudden acces denied!...
you won becuz of better flow.. only a tinybit better verse..
my vote shadow..

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