I leave kids hurt, more patients for doctors/
Its the boy wit some many punchlines I feel like a boxer/
word is the bigger they are the harder they fall/
ya ryhmes is shitty rookie, you should spit in a stall/

^^ Interesting, but, it doesn't hit hard as a punch.

I leave you laying on the ground looking like the mike man(the micheal jordan symbol)/
so is you stupid or just retarded/
cuz challenging me you get beat like old carpets

^^^ Structure is too simple...up complexity of metas/wordplay/punches

15/30

im bout to switch to crush mode on this cat,
"mikeal jordan' has noting to do with gats,
Are you dope? I think not, Your nothing more than a big flop,
And since he can't drop good Shit,I'll treat him like a Piss Pot,
Confident? Sory gets negative votes cause he attracts opposites,


^^ Structure/rhyming could be better...but your punches are at least aimed more at your opponent thatn his were.


Vote: Big COuntry...harder punches