Etc. your rhyme reeks of NewBism. I'm not hatin though cuz that is what my first rhyme was like...I got KO'd. You will probably elevate pretty quickly thoug cuz I can tell you have potential. The verse, though, was weak in that the punches weren't strong, the rhymes werent creative, and the rhyme structure was basic. That's what you are going to be judged on ya feel, so keep up.

Big P...I say pick on someone your own size, but this is all you. Return the favor!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129235

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