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Old 06-11-04, 10:01 PM   #1
Cursive
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How did I...

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how did i not win this...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...79&page=1&pp=15
it was a topical battle. topic was "why did i do it" picked by opponent...

i had better structure, more multis, imagery, vocab, emotion, and creativity..

his verse was played, cliche, had mother goose rhyme schemes, lacking vocab, imagery, and emotion, and a creative twist....

...so please someone enlighten me on how i lost this...


... i sense DR votes, considereing that he is more "well-known" //
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