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Old 06-11-04, 10:21 PM   #13
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weak battle....afa-n-ssiv your verse was just bad...i had to read it 3 times just to understand it how you worded stuff was bad...structure was choppy...flow was inconsistent...no hard punches no personals no wordplay or multies or good meta's just a bad verse

overall : 1/10

street your verse was wack at the begginning and it didnt get hott until the last couple barz u started off really weak and the punches were horrible...your structurte was choppy too... flow was decent...ok punches...decent personal about his name.. decent wordplay no multies ok meta's...

overall : 5/10

vote: street legend

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