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Old 06-11-04, 10:57 PM   #14
Punchline Prince
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u dumb ass pricks,dis wasnt no one sided battle,quit ridin 40s dick. It was a good battle but ravage u gotta work on that rhyming, ya punches are decent,but there just simple. When i right sometimes i use a thesaurus if the words are too simple. remember its always a better word for anyword go to thesaurus.com and type in jump. i bet chu find a better word for it, and when u find a better more complex word, itll help ur next line sound good.But 40 got chu dis time,but u not wack bro,u just need to elevate a tad know what im sayin?So take this as a lesson aiight

hope this helped..

v/40caliberhitz
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