Man who is this dude, he's so weird like ice cube
All he do is loce around, comin up wit some fake ass rhymes all tha time
Look, I see tha fury in ur eyes which u heard from my name
Plus I got this thang that'll rock ur brain
So don't get bitchy when I get at ur name
And take one for tha team dang recognize tha game
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass

^^ 1st line was wack...how are ice cubes weird?


Work on evening out lines and using more complex, less wack punches/metas


Dont be encouraged by my record you bitch//
Im still nice It's Street Legend out to murder this "lil shit"//
I dont wanna find out this nigga is ridin g-unit dick//
you usin 50 rhymes but we usin clips//
Dawg, before steppin to me work on ya rhyme scheme//

^^ 1st 2 lines win this battle for you

Elevate on metas and vocab


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