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Old 06-12-04, 03:41 PM   #13
archieDX
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Oh my gosh!
that was some potent rhymes being dropped!

mic wrecker: you had a cold intro with:


im sick of bumpin ya gumz like u da hardest in this place//
stick to what you do best.....let my semen marinate on ya face//

but you lost your flow with stuff like

you better off playin the background like batman's sidekick//
or gettin busted in the eye kicked in the leg hobblin around like blackbeard the pirate//

no offence blood but your rhymes sounded rushed

missfiyagal:
im feelin it! rhymes like:

date-(ma) lines pull "his bluff"->efforts to fade his bloody aroma/
fate-fucked! use full-life support to evade this permanent comma!/

lyrical plat! your intro wasnt as good as mic wreckers but the follow through was complete.

my verdict: victory miss fiya gal
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