Guyver-
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This bitch punk roll up on me frettin/
The only dance he learnt from his ma was 2 steppin/
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^^^ Weak
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I ride the mic like Guyver here, outa control/
Spit weak rhymes bitch shove 'em up ya ass with ya 17 ince fro/
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^^^^ Weak, no orginiality or wordplay or anything creative.
Overall your verse consisted of a sketchy flow, a simple structure which isnt necessarily bad and weak punches. Just work on making creative punches and just keep practicing. DOnt give up.
Yo- Yo
Overall ur flow and structure was a sketchy and ur punches were weak also.I do give u a plus for attempting to be creative with ur punches. I see a lot of potential in u if u just work at it.
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They call this kid millwakee because he stack nothin but bucks/
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^^^ I see where ur comin from but it coulda been flipped better
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I got 50 ways to get rich or die tryin/
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^^^ Not a punch but it shows me u have potential
vote=Yo Yo