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Old 06-12-04, 10:33 PM   #14
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okay...good topic...good battle

shadow.i felt your verse and I liked it a lot...everything was good but the ending....in a topical battle you want to express how you feel emotionally..and when you just cut it off at a bad twist..it makes it seem like a joke....and i didn;'t really like that...so that took away hard core..anyways..not a bad verse though

Flow intelligent...your verse was good...had some good lines in there..imagery wasn't as good as shadows but there wasn't muxch difference between your verses as far as what was better and what wasn't....untill the end...you had a pretty good ending...and I liked your twist...that made your verse better...where as shadows aending made his worse..i gotta give it to you flow intelligent...much respect...keep bangin....2 fingas one love
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