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IP:
IS-You took this..Structure was decent
but not very balance and plus you had the
Vocab..Metaphores weas there but Need work on
those Keep elevatin
PLott-Yours was aight...But your vocab
and spelling was shitty..and similies was
there and stuff and also metphores but
your structure was a little off to..
v/IS
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DOPER THEN DOPE
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