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Old 06-13-04, 01:18 AM   #11
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i'll use 40's example to show what i thought of this battle.

DLeon:
Rhyme Scheme:7/10
Flow:6/10
Imagery:7/10
Wordplay:7/10
Vocabulary:6/10
Creativity:7/10
Storyline:7/10
Entertainment Value:8/10
Overall:62/80

PoTenTial:
Rhyme Scheme:6/10
Flow:8/10
Imagery:7/10
Wordplay:7/10
Vocabulary:6.5/10
Creativity:7.5/10
Storyline:6/10
Entertainment Value:7/10
Overall:55/80

Why?: Deleon had a real nice verse, i loved it to be honest. had a good concept and nice story line and had a bit of comedy in there. nice drop that one. potential did good too. had real nice flow which is what stood out for me. tha vocab was good but not as well used as deleon. tha storyline was okay but it was good how u showed another perspective. it was a close battle but i think deleon took it, his was juz a slight bit better. props to ya both, nice battle

vote = deleon
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