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Old 06-13-04, 07:48 AM   #13
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for mixxed mc:

flowretty straight forward nothing special as far as structure goes workin for what it was though 5.5/10

volcab:basic array nothing advance here 5/10

punches:you addressed him everyone nothing i saw too strong though alot of just i'ma kick his ass type lines more then anything 6/10

overall:16.5/30

breakdown for unholy wun:

flow:basic nothing complex same as your oppenent 5.5/10

volcab:edged out mixxed i think still not overly amazing though 6/10

punches:some alright lines nothing too new and anything but it all worked well my fav,"You couldnt be Big on The "Web" if u were Spider-Man.." good job 7/10

overall:18.5/30

vote--unholy wun
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league