Thread: shadow vs. l.i
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Old 06-13-04, 07:56 AM   #11
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for shadow:

flow:it seemed kinda shaky too me there was some questionable rhyming vote and win? nope and vote? the bar lengths didn't always add up either. still didn't seem too bad when reading it though so 5/10

volcab:not great really nothing special 5/10

punches:best part of your verse you did well at tryin to get personal some pretty good lines here my fav,"L.I. stands for "lyrically inferior...meaning he cant match up......" nice job 7/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for l.i.:

flow:workin well alot better then shadow i thought 7/10

volcab:good job still not too complex but better then most of the league 6.5/10

punchesretty good job here addressing shadow most of the verse nothing i feel like quoting but still it was working 6.5/10

overall:20/30

vote--pretty good match up but l.i. gets my vote
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