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Old 06-13-04, 08:09 AM   #28
DirtBoy69
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your lucky i don't close this thread and boot you all out for freeposting your not suppose to anyway stop it

breakdown for rascal:

flow:good flow basic structure though could work on that 6/10

volcab:nothing real special need work here 5/10

punches:some good lines against both my fav,"For fuck's sake, I'll have you "whining" like your crushin grapes.." too bad your verse was so short i think it's gonna hurt you i thought you did while though 6.5/10

overall:17.5/30

breakdown for soul skripts:

flow:workin alright nothin wrong with it 6/10

volcabretty good still room to improve though 6/10

punches:don't know here nothing too strong,alot of them though that's good my only problem was with this line,"Picture Perfect you fake pac - plus ya just a faggot queer" if he's a faggot and queer wouldn't the too cancel each other out and he'd end up being striaght? but anyway alright i guess 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for pictureperfect2:

flow:really wasn't workin for me bar length was all over the place i don't think it was a great job here 4.5/10

volcab:better then your oppenent but that's bout it 6.5/10

punches:some good lines i liked them more then rascal or soul my fav," could take out (soul, s.k.r.p.) and still wouldn’t have IT" best here 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--pictureperfect2 gets my vote pretty closely matched up battle though
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