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Old 06-13-04, 08:16 AM   #9
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for vango:

flow:good flow no problems i see with it 7/10

volcabretty good better then alot of the battles i've been reading this week 6.5/10

punches:some alright lines not too many of them though mainly filler fav was,"I was thinking of a way to describe you, your a Rap Menstrual cramp" i've seen better from you but this still worked alright 6/10

overall:19.5/30

breakdown for meters:

flow:nice job i got nothing really to say bout it 7/10

volcab:workin well some alright wordplay to spice things up 6.5/10

punches:for the most part it was alright my fav,"ll cut my opponent's brakes...and derail this homo Van" other lines got pretty personal too good job 7.5/10

overall:21/30

vote--meters
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league