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Old 06-13-04, 12:16 PM   #9
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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rated your verse was wack!!!
your flow wasnt flowing that good ....your strutcutre was alright but not great
best part:As the light gleems in my eye I only see one thing and thats veryation
Sniper I dont know the name of the brand but I planned an assination
President George Bush, united forced leader to be right and exact
Sitting in my back window on 34th street for a fact
^^ you strated of great...

worstepartONe more thing before I put him to rest of I didnt have no crusafex
Why, why Terrell Your just a bumb Black boy whos trying to search for sex
Getting my self over it I aimed at his Leadership and fellowship heart
Oops I messed up my aim becuz I had a full stomach and I had to fart
^^ that last part was immature and you lost the battle cuz you made his a joke

restircted
you put good imagrey and emotion into this battle you won becuz of better flow imagrey and emotion
bottom line i aint gota say no more.....
--shadow
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