Thread: Ill - Legal . .
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Old 06-13-04, 12:19 PM   #13
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Rhymes'll Hit you So High..You Could stick your tongue out at left eye...
Your Rhymes Are unsteardy, Reload the nine and Pop You In ya left thigh...

It's still a filler . . Your not making a point at the end of the 2nd line

Check this . . Example..

Your girl's a local whore & i'm always popping them bra's.
And she's got a comunity chest . . like monoply cards . .

If you've played monoply you will know what community chest is . .
It's also trying to say .. the comunity all have a go with your girl's chest/brest..
Thats wordplay & a punch because the monoply cards explain's & make the wordplay kick in.. & it make it a witty punch

But if i was you & said

And she's got a community chest.. Im always hitting the bitch

It would be a filler it doesnt finsh the joke or sentence or diss you get it no wordplay found.
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