this was a give in...smartz had it all the way

lil trip..u need to seperate ya bars n have sum type of a structure to make it easier to catch ya flow on ya verse...

smartzz...nice verse but dont try to force any lines that arent there..it messes up ya flow nahmean?

+breakdown+
punchez:smartzz
flow:smartzz
comedy:trip
metas/multis:smartzz
overall:SMARTZZ

gluck to both mc;z...

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