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Old 06-13-04, 08:00 PM   #17
The Jett
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Drop An Honest Vote Here.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128836

Ok.....
ILL
This battle gonna be like a “rose” ya verse is a lil prick
Unholy wun or metal which “alias” sucked DV’s dick
second line OK personal...
nastic movements perform death blows to the face, leavin you wit a blown-jaw
scared to step in "the ring", this kid act like he got a "7 days phone call"
stretched compared to first bar,OK metiphore...lil far-fetched
"fuck tearin manually", step in my direction and i'll have you "ripped-automatically"
punchlines will give u "vertical slice" to the body,so how you like"split-personalities"
OK wordplay,second line was really nice...
leave i.s. sliced on ya chest, now its impossible to mistake-me
you "quick to leave out windows" like you rapidly pressin "escape key"
a lil played...the whole computer's...window's thing
i'll murder ya whole corpse, clear foundations by clashin in full-force-then
multis "rips heads", you "never able to see me" like "the headless-horsemen"
how do u murder a corpse? Bad multi's....
i think mentals’s a 'gay-nerd' cuz nothing he 'says-hurts
mental doing "crosswords" is the only way he can "play-words"
short compared to last bar, first line dumb, second line OK wordplay
beat me? you better hope you get some-drastic-blessings
cuz i'll leave 'mental flipping' like kids with ‘gymnastic-obsessions’
drastic blessing....NO,wak metiphore...who has a Gymnastic Obsession?

Ok drop. Alot of wordplay, some played, some dumb, and one or two nice ones. Your flow was off, short long short long......Dont like ur space'd structure

Mental
DQ

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