Aiyo Check It..

CarsonJet2X: 7/10
Your Punches Weren't Hitting Real Hard...But I Liked The Creativitiy and Your Ryhme Scheme Was Definitly Hot. Your Metaphors and Mulits Were Decent. Nice Drop Man.

VA: 5/10
Your Punches Coulda Been Hotter With More Wordplay...Your Punches Kinda Lacked Sense...Use More Vocab and Word Usuage...But Nice Drop To You Too.

Vote- Carson For Better Punches and Wordplay

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