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Old 06-13-04, 08:32 PM   #14
The Jett
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topic fit you well. You capitalized on getting your point across in a nice rhyming fashion.Flo was on key at all time's. A few times you came out of context. but it wasn't a huge deal. Overall a nice drop. The best part about ur topical were ur descriptive metiphores...Nice.

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I'll be honest. I really wasn't feeling this at all. Number one ya flow was off. Which murder's a topical. Also your lil story really didn't grasp my attention...it was like blah blah blah...jus shoot the bastard. No real emotion into it. No hate. Work on that.

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