ok dis was a nice battle both on topic deadly i like the intro and da splits so it was nice re$tricted nice hammy dowmn drop feelin it both emcess had it goin nicely

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start-I Strive For The Worlds Acceptance But Get Declined..
I Struggle To Survive In Life, Collect Every Nickle and Dime..

nicely done 9.4/10

deadly

start-This topical is about my life & how it resambles to game of dice, I am not chasing I am Pacing to reach my destination away from face of death we just guests trying to Defend the meaning of our lives the quality of our lives that’s what matters not cash nor ice it’s the price we pay for our sins till the life line ends.

nice^^^ lol long but nice 9.7/10

R

bestline-Once A Teenage Dream, Football Star, HighsMen Trophy..
But Credit Cards, No College, The Debt Is Choking Me..

dat shit was tite
10/10

deadly

I Guess all of these crimes is stressing, terribly depressing..
Jfk Shooting, Nobody confessing, either way they were messing..

nice vocab 9.5/10

helped up verse

R-
Low Standards? Who You Think You Are To Make Those Judgements..
I Live The Same Way You Do Just Diffrent Concepts Of Budgets..

made a impact helped yo verse stand out 9.6/10

deadly-This pain needs to end quick, this shit is beginning to make me sick..
It's just un-believable like a flick, anybody can solve the trick..


^^ nice 9.4/10 also yo vocab stood out

closer

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I May Be At The Bottom of Bottoms and I Can't Sink Any Further..
Just Maybe I Can Suceed If I Take My Brain and Heart and Merge'm..
9.6/10 swrap up nicely

deadly

So we only have memories today, of people who paved the way..
People like our close ones I'd say, only move left is to pray..

vocab slipped but nice 9.6/10

overall

flow-R
vocab-deadly
structure-both
multis-both
meta-both
consitant-R
beginning-Deadly
closer-R
winner-R

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