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Old 06-13-04, 11:13 PM   #18
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excellent verse by both restricted came with an approach based on social class and money that was real dope thats a surivial in itself the surival of money but i felt deadly were deadly vision went with the verse more.. i feel like his verse dealt with the ultimate survivial and he hit it on the head better his verse i felt flowed better line after line merged together well


i felt like these lines here were nicely done

"From my first breath all my steps were already planned and known..
On this Earth I am not free to roam but confined within extremist zones..
What do you do when someone has a gun, best move is to run..
Don't defend, you'll be a lost son, we don't want to lose another one..
Brings to mind Big, Pac and Biggie, all of a sudden the fun is done..
But now our lives turned glummy, after hearing news of a fallen buddy..
It's so hard to suceed in survival, almost impossible to turn a smile..
Only the fittest survive! every ssecond of life is worth a while.. "

deadlies verse was more poetic to me , restricteds was nice but i felt like he could have came better with the subject he took up

vote- deadly
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